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A machine for making thought work


By John Clute

The title isn't the half of what's half about Half Life. Hal Clement's latest book is half a story, half a cast, half a climax, half a book, half asleep, half precious. Maybe all precious. Half Life is certainly an object lesson in how not to write a work of fiction; and it is absolutely deliriously unsuccessful as a work of fiction. But this is absolutely deliriously deliberate. Hal Clement has undertaken to accomplish what he has accomplished in this utterly strange little volume.

It is indeed very strange. We begin with a page-long passage entitled "General Order Six (GO6)," which lays down rules of oral discourse for scientists who wish to speculate about their observations and theories; these rules of discourse are designed to ensure objectivity, politeness, balance, and calm. They are adhered to throughout by the cast of the novel, almost all of which is devoted to a series of objective, polite, balanced, calm discussions. Nobody gets angry at nobody. Nobody is power mad. Nobody is manic depressive. Nobody does nobody in. Nobody--in any normal sense of what human beings amount to in a work of fiction--is the name of the cast.

A short prolog called "Ante" follows "General Order Six (GO6)." It is narrated in an extremely distant narrative voice, and tells us why, two centuries up the line, an unnamed ship has left Earth for Titan (Saturn's largest moon), crewed by 50 humans, most of whom--like most of the shrunken population of Earth--are fatally ill. Life on our planet has been assaulted by a long series of opportunistic illnesses. The ship (I swear it is unnamed, though I may have missed something here) has been sent to Titan in order to "fill the information gaps between the mineral and biological worlds," to find out if the pre-life conditions on Titan might give some clue why biological processes on Earth have gone so seriously awry.

Talking heads

The book itself takes place entirely in orbit around Titan, or on the surface of the great moon, and is fixed up from an amalgam of previously published stories, each featuring different members of the crew of the spaceship/station. But it is something of a misnomer to say "featuring," because most of the cast consists of talking heads who sound identical; and it is equally misleading to say "takes place," because almost nothing happens where, as it were, the story is being told.

This requires a bit of explaining.

As the main narrative begins, we learn that every surviving member of the crew is quarantined from every other member of the crew. Nobody meets anybody during the course of the book. Nobody (as far as I could tell) even sees anybody during the course of the book. The three landing craft that are being used to explore Titan are normally piloted by remote control, through waldoed body suits, by one or another crew member. Most of the events that take place on the surface of the planet take place, therefore, without anyone really being present or visible at all.

Nobody can be seen doing anything to nobody, nobody can be seen doing anything to any thing.

No time to spare

There is also a computer (I do not, however, remember Clement actually using the word "computer") on board the unnamed ship. Though two centuries have passed, it is a very stupid computer, differing from my own desktop mainly in that it has a voice function. Like most First SF writers, Hal Clement has no time to spare for the computer, or for the information revolution in general: as far as the pages of Half Life depose, his imagination does not like contemplating the transforms we are already over the edge of beginning to witness. He is interested in something else.

So. We have a cast we cannot visualize. We have events nobody witnesses in the flesh, mostly. We have a book made up mostly of blind conversations meticulously adherent to the story-unfriendly protocols of General Order 6. What in the world do we have that we can do anything with?

A strangeness on Titan

We do have a strangeness on Titan: motile hollow cups or cusps seem to be forming around the landers and what they deposit upon the un-live surface. One of the humans, dying of a particularly painful disease (almost as intolerable as shingles), deliberately goes to his death on the surface, opening his face mask to let the devouring gel in, so that it may be seen how it will react to the wealth of stimuli a human body might provide. I am not competent to report on Clement's characters' polite discussions of the consequences of this action on the sort of lifelike gel; but I retrieve some sense that what happens is a proto-life activity, perhaps at the enzyme level. It is all highly conducive to speculation. And finally, late in the book, one of the characters ties what is happening on Titan to what may be happening on Earth.

And the book ends.

So far, what is being described is a book as subversive of normal narrative procedures as an anti-roman from France. Is there anything left? Yes, yes. Two things. One: slowly but inexorably, any reader who stays the course of Half Life will fall in love with thought itself, with the caress and tickle of ideas inching into focus. All is sacrificed--cannily, knowingly, naughtily--to that process. Half Life is an exudation of thoughts borning.

Two: it stands at one pole of what SF used to be all about, in the 20th century we have loved so much, a time when some of us were ambitious enough to write stories in which we understood our tools. Half Life hearkens back to those days. It is a machine for making thought work.


John Clute is a writer, editor, critic and scholar of science fiction. He is the author of Science Fiction: The Illustrated Encyclopedia and co-editor of both The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction and The Encyclopedia of Fantasy, all Hugo Award winners. His criticism and reviews have appeared in The New York Times, The Washington Post, Omni, The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction, and other places too numerous to list; much of this material has been collected in Strokes: Reviews and Essays 1966-1986 and Look at the Evidence: Reviews and Essays.




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